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Showing posts with label small moments. Show all posts
Showing posts with label small moments. Show all posts
Wednesday, 4 December 2013
Funny-ness | Robin Garland
When I was getting dressed this morning my brother kept on making me laugh sooo hard I nearly peed my pants. Mum said that Hugh had to leave my room. But Hugh stood outside my room. it was so funny because Hugh pulled a funny face and it was a pig face then he said that fairytales are non-toxic (he doesn't know what it means.)
Labels:
observation,
small moments
Wednesday, 2 October 2013
Small moment | Ava Poynter
I saw it. It
looked really cool. It was my new trampoline.
I zoomed
outside and jumped in my gumboots. I ran up the steps and sprinted through the
ground. I jumped on the wood, and kicked off my gumboots. I opened the zip and
wriggled my way through it. I bounced as high as I could, and I felt great.
Will and Rose scrambled after me.
I was
screaming like a crazy kangaroo, jumping up and down saying, “Hey Will and Rose
look at me!” Will was mad. He charged up the steps like a Rhinoceros. He threw
his mouth open and shouted back, “Hey that’s not fair. I’m coming to get you!”
Labels:
memoir,
show not tell,
simile,
small moments
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